[C&C] Ander

[Kaden]

I really wish I had something... useful (?) to say?

Ander's a great character. His bravado and unrelenting machismo are nice to read. The character, however, isn't shallow. There's a lot to the way he's changed throughout your RPing and the way you slowly peel back layers of Ander (not to the reader, obviously, but to the characters around him) make him and his interactions very engrossing.

You have a great handle on Ander responds to just about any situation and his reactions all flow very nicely. Nothing is really ever jarring or suspension-breaking.

Your writing itself is well crafted and has great flow and word-choice and is always presented in an entertaining manner. You general show good attention to smaller details, describing, for example, how Ander goes about using Metal Binding to change a license plate, instead of just telling the reader it was done.

Speaking on a more personal level, I love the interactions between Kaden and Ander. They can serve as anything from simple humor to fairly deep commentary on virtually anything (be it canon or not) and still be totally in-character. No idea what the future will eventually bring for these two, but for now, the dynamic between them is both fun to read and enjoyable to write.