Kill Town - C&C

[Victoria]

I'd like to keep this thread going, it's a great idea.

I know you aren't in the saga anymore, Vad, but I read your RP and I wanted to comment on it anyway.

The RP was good overall, and I didn't expect Trixi to let Vad get taken. However, why yell at him to get up? Maybe emotional stress?

The guy at the end, I don't know him, but he definitely sounds cool with the teleporting and touching Trixi like that.

I think you're a good writer, I can't say too much bad about the RP. I'll have to read what happens next, since you didn't stay in the saga.

Here's my post: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...ostcount=2