Kill Town - C&C

[Cain]

You have clean grammar and good description. The flame thrower pops up at the right time. Victoria's reactions are nice, especially regarding her hair. Brains oozing down the hand was good, as well as the nasty bit near the end. You react well to being in a gore environment. The nike shirt and running shorts were a nice touch of fleshing out the zombies.


Either post in this thread:
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=27292