04-22-2010, 09:20 PM
I really enjoy Victoria. I also really enjoy the story you're spinning in Catching Stars. I read the entire thread in one sitting yesterday and it left me in awe. You have a way with description that conveys the mood of the characters and/or scene very well. I found myself becoming sad along with Jeremy, or frustrated along with Victoria (for two examples).
Back to Vic; I think she's a great character. She's fierce, spunky, and almost childish. You make all of her qualities, not only those, blend together and it's amazing. Having not read any of your previous work I can only say that I like the direction you're taking her in. You've stated you enjoy her a lot and it shows.
*thumbs up*
Back to Vic; I think she's a great character. She's fierce, spunky, and almost childish. You make all of her qualities, not only those, blend together and it's amazing. Having not read any of your previous work I can only say that I like the direction you're taking her in. You've stated you enjoy her a lot and it shows.
*thumbs up*
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