Char. Application: Kokeiru

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Greetings!

Welcome to Chubbs Kokeiru. Your application looks sound. Everything seems to be in order.

I must however point out that you wrote your roleplay in first person. We do not mind that you use this format in personal threads/storylines, but we ask that if you plan to roleplay with other people you use a third person format.

1st Person:

That day started off like any other. With the same typical daily routines I was used to, and found so dull and uneventful. I now regret all those days wasted on wishing for something more, something more exciting, and spending nights dreaming that I was destined for better things. Because, If my hopes and dreams HAD been answered it was at the cost of everybody else’s in my fair home town of Fenix.

Third Person:

The day started off like any other with the typical daily routines that Kokeiru was used to. He didn't like such monotonous tasks, but they were required. He regretted wasting all those days wishing for something more, something more exciting, and dreaming that he were destined for far greater things. If his hopes and dreams had been answered, it was to be at the cost of everyone in his home in the town of Fenix.

If you have any questions feel free to ask. Might I also suggest you check out this thread for further help.

I'll set up your roster and training thread and get you activated.