[C&C] Gozen

[Sigfried Hunin]

I'm trying to get back into writing, and I knew I wasn't very good before I left. I would greatly enjoy actually writing WITH OTHERS, but I want to get myself up to a "workable level" before that can really happen.

Any feedback at all would be great. I know my current story isn't great for character development, as it's all a bit vague as it stands, but you should learn more about Gozen as a character as the storyline progresses.

Anything will help.