10-21-2004, 07:20 PM
Now now, you two.
HF, it could use some work. What you need is something that can be captivating and have some obvious focal point to it. Currently, it's rather dull. I'll be eager to see what you can come up with. =)
HF, it could use some work. What you need is something that can be captivating and have some obvious focal point to it. Currently, it's rather dull. I'll be eager to see what you can come up with. =)

