[C&C] Jayd

[Victoria]

I really like Jayd, not just for obvious reasons. He's got that punk feeling, a rebel, but he also has a sense of knowing when to stay in line. I like that he doesn't know his powers, or how powerful he can become. I don't know what it is but I like characters that are snarky haha.

Your writing is, as always, very good. I know that last post was a bit of a struggle to get out, but I enjoyed it. You portray characters well. I especially like (as I told you) the two NPC's you introduced, they sound like fun.

My C&C is useless since you already know I like how you write x3, you're skill is probably beyond mine. I'm happy that you decided to do this story, and make it work for you.