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Karachi(updated)
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Looks good, but again your roleplay isn't the minimum 300 words. Also, while it's fine for joining purposes, once you start writing on the site you'll need to adhere to past tense.

EDIT: You can reply to this thread for the roleplay sample.
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Karachi(updated) - by Karachi - 07-01-2010, 05:24 AM
Karachi(updated) - by Orion - 07-01-2010, 05:42 AM
Karachi(updated) - by Karachi - 07-01-2010, 08:00 AM
Karachi(updated) - by Karachi - 07-01-2010, 08:01 AM

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