[C&C] Kaden

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I began catching up on Kaden, however, I have since then put you on hold. Not due to anything on you as a writer or on Kaden as a character as I am actually enjoying this read. Simply, its because its gonna be a while before my character can hang with yours >.>

However, I felt like giving CnC on what I have read. From everything that I have read on this site Kaden is creepy on a personal level. not that he is actually creepy, but in that he reminds me of myself way to often. I'm sure thats something most can agree with, but his thought process is almost exactly the same as my own. Its creepy.

So much infact that I could not stand Solina, she annoyed me and left a disdained taste in my mouth, however, I still wanted to see more of her. I'm certain thats exactly how Kaden feels about the character.

These feelings I have on your work are top notch and should be a goal for any writer to have with their audience. I'd also like to note that you recieve more than your fair share of praise, yet still tend to remain confident not cocky which is a blessing for any human to have in what they do. I'm really just posting to let you know that your roster is helpful to newcomers and I hope you keep it up. Its fantastic for navigating through your work.

Good job, now, fuck you. That is all.