08-09-2010, 05:30 AM
6/10
Your grammar can leave a little to be desired at times, so that's something to watch. That said, you can set up a scene fairly well with the details you provide, so way to go on that.
Your grammar can leave a little to be desired at times, so that's something to watch. That said, you can set up a scene fairly well with the details you provide, so way to go on that.

