08-12-2010, 05:04 PM
Being a newbie, I'm just looking for feedback on my writing/character now that I've finished my first thread. Namely pacing, character development, writing quality, and things of that ilk.
Of course, anything at all is helpful! Don't be afraid to be nitpicky; I learn best from constructive criticism.
Jarka is introduced in A Dash of Hope
Thanks, everybody!
Of course, anything at all is helpful! Don't be afraid to be nitpicky; I learn best from constructive criticism.
Jarka is introduced in A Dash of Hope
Thanks, everybody!
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If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.
If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.