08-13-2010, 07:28 PM
Loved it. The pacing and the actual plot progression was a pleasant reprieve from most of our "too fan-ficy" styles, and it led to some real character development and a show of style as opposed to the all-too-common "AND THEN THIS HAPPENED" storytelling.
I hope you keep writing, and I hope you keep giving me delicious sub-recipes as a part of your story. >_>
I hope you keep writing, and I hope you keep giving me delicious sub-recipes as a part of your story. >_>