01-04-2011, 07:21 AM
Good stuff. If I could offer one tip, use a few more full stops rather than commas in your sentences. It makes it a little easier to read and it flows better.
Other than that, I'll set you up. Welcome to Chubbs!
Other than that, I'll set you up. Welcome to Chubbs!


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