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Joining as spikes
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Good stuff. If I could offer one tip, use a few more full stops rather than commas in your sentences. It makes it a little easier to read and it flows better.

Other than that, I'll set you up. Welcome to Chubbs!
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Joining as spikes - by Spikes - 01-04-2011, 07:10 AM
Joining as spikes - by Orion - 01-04-2011, 07:21 AM
Joining as spikes - by Vad - 01-04-2011, 07:30 AM
Joining as spikes - by Spikes - 01-04-2011, 11:48 AM

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