03-23-2011, 01:48 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-23-2011, 01:52 AM by Shane Warnock.)
Sigfried Hunin Wrote:Shane Warnock:
I wasn't sure if he was high or crazy or what. Apparently it was foresight, but I wasn't sure how the foresight really applied? I dunno, but it really threw me for a loop.
Crazy high? Are you talking about the part where Edward had been replaced by a form of himself. I explained that he had been hallucinating. I made sure I explained everything that had happened. It's one of those posts where you had to read every word to understand it, as opposed to just skimming through it. (Not saying you skimmed through it either though)
Sigfried Hunin Wrote:Shane Warnock:
Later in your second post, he brought back a microphone which had pretty clearly been broken in Ed's post, but I suppose that isn't like, a huge deal. I'd like to see more from your character and maybe under different circumstances I can get to know him a little better.
I wrote in it a way that explained that he had used foresight in Alex's post when he crushed the mic. I thought that was written clear enough.
Every time I used foresight, I made it evident using italics, acompanied by a referal to the act that I actually used the ability.