[BT1] Shane Warnock v Edward Reynolds Resolved

[John Doe]

Shane: Old record, but I was confused by the whole foresight stuff at the start of your posts and how you used it and all that. You did better with the foresight when it was very short visions. I think it's a good way to keep the post moving along nice and smooth. I also enjoyed how you incorporated a bit of his back story with the old principle alongside the action, and flowed smoothly. Quite smooooooth, ma man. (smooth x4)

Edwardo-kun: I enjoyed the use of inner thoughts throughout your posts; getting glimpses into the character's minds is something I like. Plus the funnies. Some typos, like the typo at the end of your second post (which made me sadface) were spotted, and the fact that your paragraphs were all similar size. All of those things didn't really bother me (because I do them too, and much more frequently).

Yeah, votes! Best to not break the chain. Edward Reynolds! I don't envy whoever has to fight you next round.