Goddamn, I'm ashamed this is the first I've read of your stuff, you're a top-notch writer. Sometimes I have to make a genuine effort to read something: yours just flows from the page and into my mind with seamless transition. I put it partly down to the dialogue, which feels very natural. I'll hold off the rest of my C&C until you're done, but I thought I'd give you something to show I'm at least sticking to my promise and reading it =P
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Bra Wrote:People are dumb, essentially.

