[BT1-QF] Orsalis v Edward Reynolds Review

[John Doe]

But yeah, I can't find any typo stuff... can you point it out to me so I can know what I did wrong? I must not know what the error is, so I really don't wanna redo it xD

It's not so much "typo" as it is "using the wrong word." I did it myself for a long time in the saga, replacing "rifle" with "riffle." The spell check didn't go off, and I never reread my stuff at all to catch it. It's becoming one of the most common errors a writer can have.

As well, I don't think you mixed up "too" and "two" in your tournament posts (I think I saw one in your Jayd fight or the common thread and just wanted to bring it to your attention. The posts outside of this fight did not sway my decision in any way. Gonna make that clear ), though I did spot this in your first post.

"With a sickening gurgle, and a bubbling stream of blood rolled down Edward’s chin, a loud gasp washing over the crowd."

The "and" doesn't need to be there, but most spell checkers won't spot a grammar error like that.