[BT1-QF] Orsalis v Edward Reynolds Review

[Mal Nova]

Orsalis: In your first post, you were easily able to describe everything that happened. But what stuck out in my mind, that juttered(Is this a word?) the flow you had going was, this here: A heavy kick crashed into the underside of his jaw with all the force of a 'field goal kick,' Other then that, the description and flow were great, in my honest opinion. Though, at the begining somewhere I initially thought you were going to make me have to pull out a dictionary...
Second post....You see... I never read anything about the her or the name before,.... so that threw me for a loop. Had me curious... but threw me for a loop.. Guess I had people swinging on mine about something similar...Maybe you should have given more of an informative peice?


Reynolds: I think there was something similar to Orslisis Field goal kick, that had me pause in yours, but it was less noticable I think, and I dont want to go hunt it down, I believe it was the accordian peice. Your flow seemed to remain the same throughout the entire RP and came out very well.
Secon Post... I swear there was a section that stuck out in my mind, but I guess you are doing it on purpose, but it kind of knocks the flow off...

I do have to say and wonder if the Regeneration was a bit over played in this bout, if not god modded in a sense, and I dont think it was really by the user of it.


I'll choose not to vote. Unless asked to and really need to.