04-07-2011, 01:36 AM
I'm going with Orsalis on this one.
Orsalis balled the stock of Edwards quips, character traits and overplayed Edwards character. Edward seemed to take the bait, buying into playing a passive role, and forcing the humor at points (which I get with trying to play a humorous character). Edward is no doubt a better writer, but his story wasn't luring me in as much as Orsalis's. I guess emotion really does shine in these posts because I wanted to see what was going to happen next when I read Orsalis's posts. There were the grammatical errors, but I'm no grammar nazi.
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Orsalis balled the stock of Edwards quips, character traits and overplayed Edwards character. Edward seemed to take the bait, buying into playing a passive role, and forcing the humor at points (which I get with trying to play a humorous character). Edward is no doubt a better writer, but his story wasn't luring me in as much as Orsalis's. I guess emotion really does shine in these posts because I wanted to see what was going to happen next when I read Orsalis's posts. There were the grammatical errors, but I'm no grammar nazi.
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