04-07-2011, 04:00 AM
I know I talked to you in the IM, but here we go.
I know that Alex is strait forward, to the point. I like that, but I also sense a tinge of derangement, of crazy lurking in there somehow. I'd like to see it come out, remembering drugs and all the rest. Not even like, direct exposition, but just little quips, little asides, little bubbling thoughts that go back to his more maniacal side. Just a little infusion of "flowery" words and the like, I dunno mang.
I know that Alex is strait forward, to the point. I like that, but I also sense a tinge of derangement, of crazy lurking in there somehow. I'd like to see it come out, remembering drugs and all the rest. Not even like, direct exposition, but just little quips, little asides, little bubbling thoughts that go back to his more maniacal side. Just a little infusion of "flowery" words and the like, I dunno mang.
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