04-09-2011, 01:30 PM
Meh I meant to post last night... But I couldn't find anything really wrong with it.. It was near perfect in my opinion.. The escort thing had me confused for a bit... Cuz I thought you initially took the little namek to a store to get you some smokes... Then realized the whole point of being late... and i actually understood it
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer