BT1[SF] - Belle Hibiki v Alex Trafford Review

[John Doe]

Trafford: I've noticed that you like to used "sun kissed" or something similar when you start these fights. Not factoring that into this vote, just saying that I saw it.

Your posts are incredibly well written. Not just for of the way you frame your sentences and your choice of words, but also because you seem to be able to visualize what you what to write in excruciating detail. I usually have the latter, but significantly lack the former.


Belle: Just like Traff, your posts were written well. You know how to paint pictures with your words and understand your character and setting enough to correctly portray it. There were a few strange phrases or sentences, like:

Alex, if anything, looked just as surprised, the bringing up of his other weapon halting.

It felt really awkward to me.


Both: Trafford and Belle have a history together and you both manage to show it. It kinda reminded me of the Vic and Orion fight early on, where there was a sense of history without over-explaining it. Both of you also dove into some personal character history in your second posts. Trafford had his character tell the story, and Belle had the narration do it instead. Both different but both did their job.

The entire fight was very vivid and emotional, with great material from both sides. I'm going to vote for Belle at the end of it all.