04-25-2011, 12:55 AM
Both of you know that I love your writing for entirely different reasons.
Doe:
I absolutely love when people go meta, especially in regards to the happenings on the site. The part with Doe and the organizer made me laugh out loud knowing the kerfluffle that took place before the wildcard option was selected.
As usual, I really wish you would just start writing, like, an hour earlier. Your posts could get that much more in depth or you could do that much more proofreading. These did, however, feel a lot more solid than your round with Mal. I enjoyed reading them as always.
Orsalis: Sometimes you can lose the reader in your poetic-y-ness, which works really well for Sigfried (since he's so philosophically based) but doesn't always fit for Orsalis (who is more action mchatred). I've already told you everything I've thought about your writing in person, so I don't feel like retyping it here. If I must, I will.
At the end of it all, I vote
Orsalis
Doe:
I absolutely love when people go meta, especially in regards to the happenings on the site. The part with Doe and the organizer made me laugh out loud knowing the kerfluffle that took place before the wildcard option was selected.
As usual, I really wish you would just start writing, like, an hour earlier. Your posts could get that much more in depth or you could do that much more proofreading. These did, however, feel a lot more solid than your round with Mal. I enjoyed reading them as always.
Orsalis: Sometimes you can lose the reader in your poetic-y-ness, which works really well for Sigfried (since he's so philosophically based) but doesn't always fit for Orsalis (who is more action mchatred). I've already told you everything I've thought about your writing in person, so I don't feel like retyping it here. If I must, I will.
At the end of it all, I vote
Orsalis
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If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.
If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.