[BT1-FINAL] Orsalis v Alex T REVIEW

[Alexander Trafford]

I've augmented clothes in the past. He can basically use psychokinesis on anything he wants, at any time. I'm not allowed to blow up people, however. But I've considered, like, detonating the surface of someone's skin. Like a golden hue flittered around his arm and then exploded, but tha would kinda be going against what Trafford actually does. His psychokinesis works in that it augments the entire structure of the object; it's not just the surface of the bullet, but the everything that is the bullet, down to its molecular structure or whatever. The energy almost becomes a part of its structure. To detonate a person, then, even if I just did, say a limb, that entire limb would have to be blown apart. And I've never fought a character with regeneration, so I don't feel comfortable doing that.

Also, I know my writing was uninspired this round. I was rushed, I hate word limits because, you're right, I make long, flowery descriptions of things at every turn. In my mind I want to write so that everything I write can be clearly picture by the reader, because I hate ambiguous descriptions in other's reading. I understand letting the reader's imagination make their own image, but I don't know, that's just how I've always done it. I tried to be better with that, but I reverted this round. And, honestly, this tournament has been really drawn out, in my opinion, and I just wasn't as into this and inspired as I was for, say, the DA09 final.

Also, I was trying to decide whether or not Alex even cared about winning. In my mind he didn't, because he really had no reason or motive to be on Namek other than I, OOC me, wanted to write in the tournament. But I felt that if he didn't, that'd be bad for reader's, and so I rushed that bit in. I know, bad.