05-26-2011, 05:20 PM
I would have to agree with this judgement! I just wasn't on my game for the last post. I wasn't into as much as I should have been, and it just felt sloppy and rushed. Alex definitely won the last round IMO. His descriptions were clear and understandable, and he led your mind's eye where it should go.
I, on the other hand, had a lot of confusing word usage and a very vague sense of what to do with the fight. I know I could have done a lot better than I did, but I also feel like Alex could have. I kinda think it was the worst round I wrote against somebody with.
Thanks for voting and giving good C&C guys. It helps me out, and that's important.
I, on the other hand, had a lot of confusing word usage and a very vague sense of what to do with the fight. I know I could have done a lot better than I did, but I also feel like Alex could have. I kinda think it was the worst round I wrote against somebody with.
Thanks for voting and giving good C&C guys. It helps me out, and that's important.
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