12-02-2004, 11:34 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Android-18
I might do it this weekend...after I write my book review and essay...Lol, everything piled up on me as soon as DA started.
No! Go do the other story with the guy that was in Egypt with the princess chick. That was teh shit.
Anyway, this was a good story. At first, I thought she was going to try to take the baby out herself. But wow. Good story, but it is sad and depressing. I don't think it's bad to post here especially if you are looking for criticism. If people aren't mature enough to respond in a calmly fashion *Looks at the thing he said before this* then they shouldn't respond.
But good job. I love your work.

