The first of any, the end of all.

[Victoria]

Okay, looks pretty good. One small thing, you still need to include your stats.

Strength - 0%
Focus - 0%
Endurance - 0%
Agility - 0%

You'll have 100% + 15% from inner strength to distribute.

Also, we generally write past tense third person here. There may be a chance where you might not write with others, and prefer past tense (which is fine when you write solo), but for formalities sake I need to see a sample that's in past tense. If you could either rewrite the one above, or give me a quick sample, that would be great.

Example

A massive explosion nearby shakes the landscape and blows dust and air in every direction.

A massive explosion nearby shook the landscape and blew dust and air in every direction.

Thanks!