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The first of any, the end of all.
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10-19-2011, 03:22 AM
Awesome. We all come from different styles, but as long as you're willing to try, then that's good Smile. There were some errors, and I could certainly see you're a screenwriter (hence the format of most of your dialogue).

Everything looks good to me, though. If you ever need a hand with writing mechanics, this is a GREAT thread to read: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=17671

I'll get you activated and set up right away, welcome to the site. You can start RPing once you're activated.
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The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-12-2011, 06:19 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-12-2011, 06:27 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-12-2011, 06:31 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Victoria - 10-12-2011, 10:19 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-15-2011, 08:27 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-15-2011, 09:05 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Victoria - 10-16-2011, 07:42 PM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-19-2011, 01:34 AM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-19-2011, 02:57 AM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Victoria - 10-19-2011, 03:22 AM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-19-2011, 03:29 AM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Victoria - 10-19-2011, 03:42 AM
The first of any, the end of all. - by Adam Void - 10-19-2011, 04:04 AM

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