[C&C] Please?

[Shun]

Nobody's gunna pick on you here man. Those other sites might have had people who weren't fans of it or suggested other methods but at the end of the day you gotta write your way. As long as it matches the format of the given site, 3rd person past tense, don't worry about what other people prefer. Write for you bro.

Half the people here don't even read as of late and if they do I'm sure people would appreciate seeing something different.