Moves for my character

[Kaden]

I guess there isn't too much to add to what's already been said. The core ideas of the three moves are fine, but the specifics need a bit of an overhaul.

Paralysis Wave: As Koola said, this is way too powerful. In addition, anything that directly affects another person's abilities/movement/reactions/etc. should have a pretty hefty ki drain. In addition, the effectiveness of the attack would probably depend upon the strength of the target: the stronger the target, the less effective the attack. Koola had a couple of great suggestions for making it less powerful. Heck, you could even say that it could effect whatever you wanted at the time of the attack. If you wanted to use it slow one opponent, and then dull the sense of someone else, that would be fine.

Null Zone Containement Wave: I liked this one. Properly balanced, has plenty of practical applications. Just take away the IC time references. If it lasts for "a while" that's fine. And being able to use it "once per day" may sound like a good way of balancing it, but you can jump weeks in a single sentence.

Energy Tap: No real comments. Sounds fine.

Like I said, nothing that hasn't really been said. I'm just backing what's already been laid on the table. If you want to know what we're looking for as far as balance and power goes, just check out the Technique Vault. Everything in there has been approved by the staff already.