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[Tamsin]

Name: Amadeus Phoenix
Age: 21-25
Race: Human/Non-Transformer
Appearance: Most likely something like this

http://blogsimages.skynet.be/images/000/...hiroth.jpg

History: When four fighters made the wish for a planet, Shenron did everything to make sure the planet would florish. It was thanks to this that Kajin Rala was capable of being terraformed into a natural paradise and that it enjoys peace and prosperity. But these actions resulted in a large mass of dark energy being gathered which was essentially the negative elements that the dragon god purged. Shenron sought for a way to get rid of this bulk, but thought it unwise to let it roam freely across the universe. In the end, he decided to release it all in the shape of a violent storm on Kajin Rala while the planet was relativly uninhabited. Although the god felt relieved to get rid of it, he felt great unreast when the storm ended all too quickly.

This abrupt ending had something to do with a certain boy. Amadeus Phoenix was born to a human couple on Earth. With his long hair and almost feminine beauty, he found it impossible to include himself in the often backwater society on the planet. But his own home wasn`t a safe haven either. His father was an alcoholic who beat and insulted him often while his mother was too weak both physically and mentally to protect her only child.

Plagued by enormous debt, the Phoenix family was among the first people to move to Kajin Rala. But life on the new planet didn`t turn out to be any better. Infact, a small community and a rationed living which were typical for the early civilised days of the planet made things even worse. Not being able to withstand further suffering, Amadeus ran out of their new home despite the storm that began raging at that time. He blindly ran into the unterraformed wasteland when he was struck by a lightning. But instead of immediatly stopping, it kept hitting the boy over and over again. After the storm has ceased, they found Amadeus unconscious and emitting smoke...but alive.

After days of recovery, Amadeus woke up and things soon returned to their regular ways. But that was quick to change. During one of his father`s abusive moments, the boy suffered a nervous breakdown and unwillingly unleashed the dark powers that were hid within him. The incident resulted in the deaths of both of his parents. Although the community took him in, they were still suspicious of the boy regarding the event since people were well aware of how the boy`s father treated him. Their fears were later confirmed. When a group of Saiyan boys decided to pick on him, the incident repeated itself. Although only one of the boys got hurt, the settlement grew to see the boy as a bad omen. Trying to avoid more aggresive options, they decided to send him back to Earth. He thus became the first person to be exiled from Kajin Rala.

Since the authorities on Earth were too busy with handling of colonist transports, Amadeus was left to his own devices. He traveled around, trying to survive as best as he could while regaining bits of self esteem that he lost due to his difficult life. Fate finnaly turned to his favour when he encountered an old martial artist by the name of Jackie Chun. The elderly human felt sorrow at the sight of the weak and broken person that he had encountered and decided to help the boy. Chun took Amadeus to his home on a lonely island. Besides offering him food and a home, Jackie made him his pupil and taught him the ways of martial arts and Ki. Over time, Amadeus grew both physically and mentally. The weak and shattered child grew into a strong and confident man. Suprisingly, Amadeus turned out to be very talented in the ways of martial arts and soon he was already capable of learning the hardest of techniques.

But his growth went over another path as well. While staying with Chun, he thought of the powers he unwillingly unleashed against his parents and the Saiyan bullies. Secretly, he attempted to release them by his own free will. Soon enough, his efforts finnaly brought results and the boy realised he wielded dark magics of incredible strength. To his enormous suprise, this new source of power excited him and he continued to experiment with it. The more he delved into these dark powers, the more his own personality was affected. Combined with his past experiences, he became a cruel and cunning mind which trailed further and further from the mindthough of his Sensei.

His period of training finnaly ended when he came to a realisation. The powers he had gained were given to him for a reason. This brought his mind back to the planet he was forced to leave from so many years ago. Kajin Rala was (in his thoughts) weak and decadent, but he had a gift. A gift to change the large planet and put it in it`s rightful place in the universe. With the help of his cunning and dark magic, he was capable of making Kajin Rala truly flourish.

This realisation created the final barrier that appeared between Chun and his pupil. Amadeus, determined to follow his new found goal, left the man who had helped him climb out of the wreck he was trapped in. Although the young man was grateful for this, he felt he was destined for greater things. And so he began his journey back to Kajin Rala. The peaceful and flourishing planet that things were about to change and nothing would remain the same ever again.

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Sorry for the long history. To make it short, I`m planning to make a wizard-like character who posseses both fighting skills and magic. As you see, I had given quite some thought into him. Hopefully, I will be much more succesfull with him then I was with Jackie.

So...what do you think?