03-20-2005, 04:09 AM
I will read ur saga and get back to you ASAP, usually i wouldn't actually read all of someone's personal Rp's but with all the bullshit you just had to put up with from KB and CJ.... it is much deserving.
Edit: I read it, and i discovered that you are a very good writer. I love the detail and the flowing way that you write, but at some points you use way too much detail and it completely bogs down and slows teh storyline to basically a halt with the paragraph and a half detail about a cave or something. A good storyline > good detail, in most cases.
Edit: I read it, and i discovered that you are a very good writer. I love the detail and the flowing way that you write, but at some points you use way too much detail and it completely bogs down and slows teh storyline to basically a halt with the paragraph and a half detail about a cave or something. A good storyline > good detail, in most cases.
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