03-28-2005, 12:27 AM
Quote:Originally posted by RecoomeYes, that is basically what I meant. I was at a loss of word for the place of "intellectual." That is more of a general category, since you have been focusing on details and phylisophical(sp?) details(that first RP in Quest five blew me away), if you work more with it you could become very good at it. You just need to step away ffrom too much details at some times, and just let it go without going too far into it. maybe just a sentence or two to describe a punch. Becaus eif you mix great detail and few detail properly, it could become "great."
You give great advice; its always nice o hear more than: 'me > joo' or 'good job'.
Im confused on what you said about emotional/intellectual writing or something. Did you mean that Ive kind of stopped focusing on emotion with my new 'style' (which I need to practice more)? If thats what youre saying, I agree because I havent put A LOT of effort into my posts in a long time. If I go back to spending days on one paragraph (wont happen any time soon) Id be able to strengthen them a lot more.
BTW, me > j00
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