03-28-2005, 02:06 AM
Hrm...
I've been reading some of your posts on and off recently, partly out of boredom... heck it was totally out of boredom =P
I'm having similar troubles right now. I can't seem to break out of this block I've created, making all my posts seem bland and uninteresting in my opinion.
Okay, here's my advice:
You're falling into a circle of the same words. I suggest looking in a thesaurus if you don't wish to change your writing style, so you will always have a fresh word to use for something. Another way to help this is to write random things in your spare time, using different styles of writing... comedy, description, emotion... the feelings you wish to convey basically. That, or write something completely non-dbz related. That seems to help me get some thoughts together sometimes.
That, and I know this is a DBZ rpg, and people are always supposed to be fighting, but personal reflections of your character, building a history and style to them is something I feel people need to do more. Maybe you could write a personal reflection for Zarbon, his struggle to transform, or whatever it is you are trying to do.
That's my two cents
I've been reading some of your posts on and off recently, partly out of boredom... heck it was totally out of boredom =P
I'm having similar troubles right now. I can't seem to break out of this block I've created, making all my posts seem bland and uninteresting in my opinion.
Okay, here's my advice:
You're falling into a circle of the same words. I suggest looking in a thesaurus if you don't wish to change your writing style, so you will always have a fresh word to use for something. Another way to help this is to write random things in your spare time, using different styles of writing... comedy, description, emotion... the feelings you wish to convey basically. That, or write something completely non-dbz related. That seems to help me get some thoughts together sometimes.
That, and I know this is a DBZ rpg, and people are always supposed to be fighting, but personal reflections of your character, building a history and style to them is something I feel people need to do more. Maybe you could write a personal reflection for Zarbon, his struggle to transform, or whatever it is you are trying to do.
That's my two cents

