03-29-2005, 08:30 PM
Hmm... now the text seems to stand out more. Maybe raise the text into the upper left corner and bring it closer to the left side. Also, maybe make the text a little less bright. I don't know what you are trying to do with the brighter colours to teh right of Gohan, but I think it would be better if they weren't so bright.
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