04-30-2005, 03:50 AM
I thought that this was slightly mature, but not sure as to our age group, so I just did that, 'kay.
If you see any grammatical mistakes, I would appreciate it if you PM me with them. Thank you.
If you have anything to say about this, I want to hear it. Whether it be questions about what he meant at parts, or the significance of somthing, okay. Comments on any part, okay. Constructful criticism would be very much helpful. I was going for a different approach to this one than I normally do, so, yea. . . . The only thing I don't want to hear is off-topic discussion or a plain "You suck," because I would prefer insight.
Thank. You. All. =)
If you see any grammatical mistakes, I would appreciate it if you PM me with them. Thank you.
If you have anything to say about this, I want to hear it. Whether it be questions about what he meant at parts, or the significance of somthing, okay. Comments on any part, okay. Constructful criticism would be very much helpful. I was going for a different approach to this one than I normally do, so, yea. . . . The only thing I don't want to hear is off-topic discussion or a plain "You suck," because I would prefer insight.
Thank. You. All. =)
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