05-22-2005, 05:21 AM
It is well-written, but I do not think that you are conveying your emotions very well. I do not feel like stating my reasons here, but if you would like to hear more of my insight, just PM me asking to do so.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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