Questions?

[Android-18]

The only thing I dont like in your RPs is that you cap like every word you can. The only words that need capped are the important ones, like names, places, and something significant. Dirt should not be capotalized unless its after a period. I stopped reading yours stuff because that bugs me to no end. Thats all I think is wrong with your RPs, maybe you just feel a little pushed and drained like most of us feel right now.