Questions?

Thread Rating:

0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
1
2
3
4
5

Linear Mode

Questions?

Reijin Offline

Offline

AKA Ashe

Posts: 169
Threads: 575
Joined: Oct 2001

#49

12-09-2004, 02:03 PM

Exactly what he said. If I was grading, that would be my judging factors. You wrote long, and fairly well, but you bordered on god moding. You also did extremely irritate my eyes with things like "The Dust settled" and "An Orange Film" Shit, dude, stop capilizing things that don't matter. And capitalize the things that do matter, like "i'm" should be "I'm". Other than that, /shrug

Side note... Yes, I'm working on trying to get myself to learn when to use "z" and when to use "s" if you haven't noticed. I have been switching back and forth lately b/c I just woke up and realised/realized that I use z evertime lately, and it's driving me insane.

[Image: reijinchefsig.jpg]

"I'm gonna fuck that unicorrrrrn"

Find

Reply

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-07-2004, 07:37 PM

Questions? - by Banned Dana - 12-07-2004, 08:10 PM

Questions? - by Tobias - 12-07-2004, 08:19 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-07-2004, 08:34 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-07-2004, 08:42 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-07-2004, 08:51 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-07-2004, 09:30 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-07-2004, 11:45 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 12:39 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-08-2004, 12:41 AM

Questions? - by Ruhiel - 12-08-2004, 12:46 AM

Questions? - by Ruhiel - 12-08-2004, 01:40 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-08-2004, 03:17 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 03:19 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 03:53 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 03:57 AM

Questions? - by Amadeus - 12-08-2004, 10:27 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 01:18 PM

Questions? - by Old Selipa - 12-08-2004, 05:14 PM

Questions? - by Krillin - 12-08-2004, 09:02 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-08-2004, 09:04 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-08-2004, 09:08 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-08-2004, 09:10 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-08-2004, 11:19 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-08-2004, 11:45 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-08-2004, 11:48 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004, 01:04 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 01:04 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 02:10 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 03:01 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-09-2004, 03:17 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 03:18 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004, 03:18 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 03:43 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 03:45 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 03:49 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 03:52 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 03:53 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-09-2004, 04:05 AM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-09-2004, 04:07 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 04:10 AM

Questions? - by Amadeus - 12-09-2004, 05:15 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-09-2004, 08:44 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 01:09 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-09-2004, 01:10 PM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-09-2004, 01:13 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-09-2004, 01:16 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-09-2004, 01:59 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-09-2004, 02:03 PM

Questions? - by Amadeus - 12-09-2004, 08:06 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-09-2004, 08:14 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-09-2004, 08:27 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-09-2004, 09:13 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-09-2004, 09:26 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-09-2004, 09:38 PM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-09-2004, 09:52 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-09-2004, 09:52 PM

Questions? - by Raditzu - 12-10-2004, 03:17 AM

Questions? - by Minoshia - 12-10-2004, 03:29 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-10-2004, 03:30 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-10-2004, 03:30 AM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-10-2004, 03:52 AM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-10-2004, 03:53 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-10-2004, 03:56 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-10-2004, 03:57 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-10-2004, 03:59 AM

Questions? - by Bra - 12-10-2004, 04:29 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-10-2004, 04:52 AM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-10-2004, 04:55 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-10-2004, 05:01 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-11-2004, 04:25 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-11-2004, 05:12 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-11-2004, 06:33 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-11-2004, 06:36 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-12-2004, 11:12 PM

Questions? - by Bra - 12-13-2004, 01:45 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-13-2004, 01:50 AM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-15-2004, 10:42 PM

Questions? - by Old Selipa - 12-15-2004, 11:46 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-16-2004, 03:11 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-16-2004, 03:27 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-16-2004, 03:43 AM

Questions? - by Burter - 12-16-2004, 04:06 AM

Questions? - by The Not Cool Not Tapion - 12-16-2004, 04:18 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-16-2004, 04:23 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-17-2004, 02:17 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 12-17-2004, 02:30 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-17-2004, 02:39 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-17-2004, 04:55 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-17-2004, 06:46 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-17-2004, 02:39 PM

Questions? - by Bra - 12-17-2004, 04:12 PM

Questions? - by Bra - 12-17-2004, 04:51 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-17-2004, 08:59 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-17-2004, 11:01 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-17-2004, 11:03 PM

Questions? - by Bra - 12-17-2004, 11:04 PM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-18-2004, 01:35 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-18-2004, 02:00 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-18-2004, 02:03 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-18-2004, 02:06 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-18-2004, 02:18 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-18-2004, 05:47 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-18-2004, 06:44 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-18-2004, 06:46 AM

Questions? - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-18-2004, 06:49 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-18-2004, 06:55 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-18-2004, 08:18 AM

Questions? - by Ruhiel - 12-18-2004, 07:14 PM

Questions? - by Ruhiel - 12-18-2004, 09:14 PM

Questions? - by Ruhiel - 12-18-2004, 11:58 PM

Questions? - by Amadeus - 12-19-2004, 12:27 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-19-2004, 12:32 AM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-19-2004, 12:36 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-19-2004, 07:03 AM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-19-2004, 11:29 AM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-20-2004, 10:27 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-22-2004, 06:15 PM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-22-2004, 06:30 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-22-2004, 06:38 PM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-22-2004, 07:07 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-22-2004, 07:12 PM

Questions? - by Toshiro - 12-22-2004, 07:18 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-22-2004, 07:20 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-23-2004, 01:40 AM

Questions? - by Vegeta - 12-23-2004, 02:09 AM

Questions? - by Raz - 12-26-2004, 07:30 PM

Questions? - by Bardock - 12-27-2004, 06:51 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-27-2004, 10:12 AM

Questions? - by Old Selipa - 12-27-2004, 03:15 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 12-27-2004, 06:44 PM

Questions? - by Broli - 12-27-2004, 08:38 PM

Questions? - by Raz - 01-01-2005, 07:48 PM

Questions? - by Old Selipa - 01-02-2005, 11:33 PM

Questions? - by Burter - 01-02-2005, 11:39 PM

Questions? - by Reijin - 01-03-2005, 05:52 AM

Questions? - by Broli - 01-04-2005, 12:43 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 01-04-2005, 02:43 AM

Questions? - by Bra - 01-04-2005, 02:47 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 01-04-2005, 02:48 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 01-04-2005, 02:52 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 01-04-2005, 04:35 AM

Questions? - by Reijin - 01-04-2005, 06:38 AM

Questions? - by Android-18 - 01-04-2005, 01:14 PM

View a Printable Version

Forum Jump:

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)