02-08-2005, 10:57 PM
Ok I'm feeling sick here but I'll try to say what I can...
This was a team assignment, not a "Zarbon can make up for past mistakes task". I'm sorry to say it hun...but that's just how it looked. I voted for the other team not for the way they worked, but for the fact that their RPG made sense. I read your story outline, and you lost me. It was short, vauge, and I just didn't understand it. But what bothers me is what you said right there. It was all YOUR idea, but if we wanted just one idea we would have 17 groups, not two.
You have to understand one thing Zarbon, to you the storyline may have been strong and perfect, but that may not be so to others. I have thought many times that some of my stuff was good and perfect, was I right? No, even Burter once shot down what I thought was brilliant work. You were supposed to be a TEAM, and you didn't manage that part well. You should not have used your idea if you didn't want it ruined. Believe me...if you became staff, and you kept back something from the other staff because you didn't want it ruined, you wouldn't last long. We share our work, our views, even recently Reijin worked so hard on a project and posted it for us, did we all agree? No. He ended up changing it around, but in the end that made it much better. What you could have done was combine all the ideas that were posted to make an excellent RPG, not a one man RPG, you know? I also didn't like how you forgot some people, and gave some people only a little work to do.
I might say more, but that was my main point. You were a team, and you had NOTHING to make up for, or show off that you can take the load of work. You should have worked in a way to do what the members wanted and use your ideas too.
Quote:To explain why I took alot of the work, my storyline is a very strong one, and it is all in my head, every city, every planet, other then names for the Elemention ones, is very needed, since I wanted to keep it perfect, for if someone made the Humans have swords, it might have ruined the story, so I kept it to myself.
This was a team assignment, not a "Zarbon can make up for past mistakes task". I'm sorry to say it hun...but that's just how it looked. I voted for the other team not for the way they worked, but for the fact that their RPG made sense. I read your story outline, and you lost me. It was short, vauge, and I just didn't understand it. But what bothers me is what you said right there. It was all YOUR idea, but if we wanted just one idea we would have 17 groups, not two.
You have to understand one thing Zarbon, to you the storyline may have been strong and perfect, but that may not be so to others. I have thought many times that some of my stuff was good and perfect, was I right? No, even Burter once shot down what I thought was brilliant work. You were supposed to be a TEAM, and you didn't manage that part well. You should not have used your idea if you didn't want it ruined. Believe me...if you became staff, and you kept back something from the other staff because you didn't want it ruined, you wouldn't last long. We share our work, our views, even recently Reijin worked so hard on a project and posted it for us, did we all agree? No. He ended up changing it around, but in the end that made it much better. What you could have done was combine all the ideas that were posted to make an excellent RPG, not a one man RPG, you know? I also didn't like how you forgot some people, and gave some people only a little work to do.
I might say more, but that was my main point. You were a team, and you had NOTHING to make up for, or show off that you can take the load of work. You should have worked in a way to do what the members wanted and use your ideas too.
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