06-29-2005, 12:38 PM
Burtah is right, man. I think you can portray your message very, very well through the written word. I can practically feel what is going on when I read it. I especially liked this paragraph. Very well done, Koola. *golf clap*
Quote:Originally posted by Koola
I felt your glow, bending and shaping. Becoming. The clarity of water. You are, before you are. I can still feel the way you spoke to me. Filled my head and lead me forth. A self broken toy, I remained. In the toy chest you built for me. I try. Happy you kept from us.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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