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moments before the fall
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08-21-2005, 06:57 PM
Shiet! That was pretty damn good, especially the sentences, "This rock will never become the sand underneath the ocean. This is the rock that damned our river." I agree with Uub. This is, in my opinion, your best that I've read.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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moments before the fall - by Vegeta - 08-21-2005, 11:31 AM
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moments before the fall - by Old Dave - 08-21-2005, 05:27 PM
moments before the fall - by Hellfighter 17 - 08-21-2005, 06:57 PM
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