09-06-2005, 09:48 PM
Um, first off, we are third person not first person narration.
As in,
"Hi, my name's Gokua" The jaded creature spoke tenderly.
A story, not just saying what happens, blah blah blah. If you don't do it the way we do it, you can't join.
As in,
"Hi, my name's Gokua" The jaded creature spoke tenderly.
A story, not just saying what happens, blah blah blah. If you don't do it the way we do it, you can't join.

