10-07-2005, 10:19 PM
If you don't want an argument, then don't say that just because we don't like rap, we don't have rhythm and we suck. Honestly? I think rap isn't music, it's rhythmical rhyming talking with a beat.
Back on topic, I'm not sure what I think about this one. As a poem, eh, I'm not so sure, I don't think it's very good as a poem. But if you worked on it some more, I would say it's could be a pretty good rap. Maybe it's because there are rhymes in some parts, and then not in others. Kinda a poem/rap mix.
Back on topic, I'm not sure what I think about this one. As a poem, eh, I'm not so sure, I don't think it's very good as a poem. But if you worked on it some more, I would say it's could be a pretty good rap. Maybe it's because there are rhymes in some parts, and then not in others. Kinda a poem/rap mix.
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