05-17-2006, 02:17 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Violet
Mr. BJ, if I may ask, how was mine? I know it isn't one of my best, but this is all I could do without my word processor. Just straight out of my head and onto the little typy boxy thingy. <3
Eh, I liked it. It amused me mildly. Showed enough of the character for me to have a good idea of how she'll act to strangers in the actual game, if she makes it.
The actually writing was below average. Good description and word choice, but it didn't flow. Kind of moved right from one thing to the next without much transition. Being an unfortunet victim of doing this all the time myself, I symphathize and it's difficult to master.