10-28-2005, 03:02 AM
Can i get some C&C and my personal RP, it's three RP's, none are of extreme length and i think it's a pretty good read. If you don't want to read the whole thing, pick one of them please. I just need some pointers to improve my writing, and what im doing well and what im doing not so well in. Thank you for your time if you do this.
Retribution- In Crimson
C&C por favor....
Retribution- In Crimson
C&C por favor....
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