Day 1 Morning Discussion

[Retane]

He wasn't being sarcstic Krillin =)

I could make huge posts in this but Burter doesn't want them. Plus I'd try to go into so much detail that... well... I'd be fucked and bore the hell out of people.

I figure everyone that is tracking Retane's movements understand what he's doing and whats going on.

I'm only trying to write Retane. He's still in character development. Don't really want to write a whole detail of an area just to have someone else come along and do it differently. Plus Retane isn't giving a damned about the detail really. It's to early for him to worry about detail. As for the emotional detail for the nunchuks, well there was none really. He likes his cards more then the nunchuks. If I find I don't know what to write, then perhaps I would go into him figuring them out.

/weird rambling