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the scent of light
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11-02-2005, 10:12 AM
Wow. This has to be the most thought-provoking of your pieces I've read to date. You are very crafty with metaphors, simply amazing about entangling them together. It touched on soem of the things that I am very adament about how I view them, which always helps grasp a reader. I'm trying to think of something bad about it, but it's pretty hard. Nice job.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-02-2005, 09:56 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-02-2005, 10:12 AM
the scent of light - by Ashe - 11-02-2005, 10:24 AM
the scent of light - by Kaden - 11-02-2005, 10:24 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 02:26 AM
the scent of light - by Claire - 11-03-2005, 02:39 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 02:43 AM
the scent of light - by Claire - 11-03-2005, 02:46 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-03-2005, 06:05 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 06:59 PM
the scent of light - by Old Dave - 11-03-2005, 08:34 PM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 12-08-2005, 10:46 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2005, 10:41 PM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 12-09-2005, 01:01 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2005, 01:03 AM
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