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the scent of light
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11-03-2005, 02:39 AM
It had good imagery, to form images in someones mind, by your choice of words. You used words to invoke the 5 senses. My only problem is I'm not a fan of long things, and after a while the effect of the poem felt less great. Of course, I feel like shit now so maybe that's just me.
It's a good style. ![[Image: A18Oct.jpg]](http://frozendust.com/sig/A18/A18Oct.jpg) DA08 Winner. "Screw them, this was her show now."
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the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-02-2005, 09:56 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-02-2005, 10:12 AM
the scent of light - by Ashe - 11-02-2005, 10:24 AM
the scent of light - by Kaden - 11-02-2005, 10:24 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 02:26 AM
the scent of light - by Claire - 11-03-2005, 02:39 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 02:43 AM
the scent of light - by Claire - 11-03-2005, 02:46 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-03-2005, 06:05 AM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 11-03-2005, 06:59 PM
the scent of light - by Old Dave - 11-03-2005, 08:34 PM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 12-08-2005, 10:46 AM
the scent of light - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2005, 10:41 PM
the scent of light - by Vegeta - 12-09-2005, 01:01 AM
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